Saturday, April 9, 2011

LP - the shins

3 comments:

  1. "The Shins" on the front large kerned closer together.

    Title of record on front should be smaller.

    &

    A lighter weight.

    b

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  2. cover: bottom right
    back: top right

    work the best for me

    only thing i have is that the name of tracks on the back are way too close to the edge. creates too much unwanted tension

    olga

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  3. better.

    attend to the details as mentioned, but nice looking.

    still prefer the white, but that's a judgment call.

    xo.

    g.

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